I just wonder if the cut at the bottom is well choosen. Seeing this mouth cut in two maks it acquire a bit too much substance compared to the stare. I saw eyes, then descending quickly along the nose to hit the mouth, this being a distraction - at the opposite of the neutral background that totally fit in here. Just saying from my own point of view, i'm not a specialist whatsoever.
Hi! I hope you don't mind but I featured this photo in my "Monday feature" journal. It would be cool if you went over there & favourite it & look at the other artists' work! Thank you, & have a nice day!